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Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 9
I'm back and have more for you. Hope this helps. I'll continue where I left off with the story and then go from there. If it gets confusing or you ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 1 (Edited)
Very good! I reread it to see if there was anything I could critique, My only real complaint is this line: I look down at my own attire. I am ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Shadows : Chapter 2
I like too talk a lot too. And I forget what I am going to say a lot too. I don't want you to be offended by any of my ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Prologue - Please Don't Rest Tonight
I think this is a great beginning. Your plot is very strong and your characters are interesting. However, I would like more of a physical description of Noel and her ...
Jul 31, 2008